Hetalia Fanfiction Guide- Language and dialouge
Hello, and welcome to the first part of my fanfiction guide will be teach to write how the characters speak properly! Because these characters are countries, each one of them, by default, speaks in their native tongue, but fanfiction is always written in the native language of the speaker. This can go for non-hetalia characters as well, If they are a non-English speaker and need to be understood by the reader. With that out of the way, lets get started. Below is a bad example of dialogue, and we are going to fix it together.
"Veeeee~~DOITSU, Veeeeee~~DOITSU-SAMA!!!" Italy screamed as he ran down the hall.
"What is it, Italia?" Germany asked. Italy told Germany that he was out of pasta, and needed to get some more. Germany agreed.
Now, how do we fix this awful, nearly unreadable dialogue?
STEP 1: NO JAPANESE HONORIFICS OR NAMES (Chan, san, ect), UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES, UNLESS JAPAN, OR A